perfect moment

Driving to the coast with the top down
Looking up the entire way.
I watched the canopy of pines and oaks
give way to the vast bright blue.
Reaching toward the heavens and
singing to Let It Be on the radio.
Imaging this perfect moment could never be as sweet
whipping around bends without a care,
I ride this fantastic rollercoaster in the forest.
Pine and salt filter through my senses
as I soar into the sky with the eagles that fly above me.
My lover extends his hand over my thigh
and I realize at this moment everything is perfect.


4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. NotATameLion
    Nov 15, 2010 @ 22:20:17

    Wish I could have taken that drive.
    Thanks for sharing…I enjoyed it.


  2. industrialarts
    Nov 16, 2010 @ 09:53:08

    wonderful piece. placed the reader right in the car with you. great job!


  3. Jingle
    Nov 16, 2010 @ 11:41:28

    lola, have fun out there,
    your poem rocks here.
    Thanks for sharing.

    passion inspires,
    your imagination flies


  4. The Reason You Come
    Nov 17, 2010 @ 03:28:31

    I like the images in this poem. Driving around, chilling, listening to the radio, with your lover beside you, teasing you, is one example of a perfect day! 🙂


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